Writing for love is a pas

Thanks for the tough advice. I fixed the poem up a little, And I think I like it better now. :mrgreen:

Revenge awaits us all someday, Revenge can pass the time away, Sneaking, plotting Scheming, stalling. For the most wonderful prize of all Winning falling from above, Time is like a ...

I don't really get it. Should be longer too. :smt085

deep man deep, it was good!

If I were that girl, I think I would fall for that poem because it rocks in a sweet way!

Hey wats up? I teared up a little reading your story, but it was great! Feel free to pm me!!

All we asked you to do was call. Then you’d see how much I love you, My loves like a leaf, its beginning to fall, Even though you said you’d ...

This is sad, but i am in the same situation! it's like you know he wants you, but he never comes and claims you, i loved the story!

As soon as I read that, my heart skipped a beat! The love was just so overwhelming that my own heart felt as if it were in the story,I LOVED ...

I like nonsense poetry... i can actually understand it!!

What to say...... WOW!! I really enjoyed it and I thank you for standing up for women's rights and showing the world how some men are vile, spineless, creatures(Resembling pigs!!) ...

That is so sad that those true things happen to good people. At the very end i started bawling and I couldn't stop. I love the story, but I don't ...

I liked it although I got Lost a lot in it!

I REALLY liked it! it shows the other side of the relationship. I never thought about it that way before! :smt003

I liked the deepness in it(although I have a small brain and got lost in some parts, I really liked it!)